Could my fanfic BE anymore far from complete? Oh sure, I am really enjoying the wait for true NaruHina

First of all, I would like to apologize for the opening of the first chapter of Kyuubi's and Reibi's. In my opinion, it wasn't exactly well thought out. I think I submitted it too soon. Some of it even sounds too cheesy for my taste, AND I'M THE FREAKIN WRITER?!!

Second, I don't know why, but my second chapter is just not finished yet. I believe that I should have finished with it earlier, but maybe I'm just too lazy, or I don't care much for it since I have a life ahead of me, or maybe it's the fact that I'm having alot of trouble with the story since I can't even compare to the original writers skill and knowledge in telling a ridiculously amazingly wrote story, Now I feel quite inferior, but I am still getting closer and closer to finishing it. I plan to have it at least over 5000 words. So far...3806. That's...OK, I guess. Kishi has been developing the story interestingly so far, that's why it so hard to write, because I'm not sure if I'll be copying what he does. My Fanfic is before the fight with Pain (and I'm not sure to include Pains EXACT past in my story like Kishi did) and after Jiraiya's death (not sure if Sage mode is up for appearance now.

I'll at least give you a new name of my own ORIGINAL character: Hikaru (F).

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Now onto a pretting nerve wrecking matter. I am just looking back on what CONNECTION Naruto is always having with Sakura. I am afraid that Kishi was developing Naruto and Sakura's relationship for a reason, a very unpleasant reason for all you NaruHina fans. Kishi has never shown any true interest in Naruto with Hinata. All he did was force Hinata into the battle against Pain, makes her share her love to Naruto for no apparent reason, even though Naruto barely saw three times after he arrived from his 3 year journey AND Naruto apparently and BAKALY/Jerkly forgets the whole confession after that last thought of her. Here's the thing, he doesn't even MENTION her once on how she got brutally beaten, all he mentions to Pain was Jiraiya, Kakashi's death's and the destruction of the whole village and EVERYONE ELSE. It would have just fit if hd mentioned Hinata individually, but no. I bet to HIM, she is just some other girl who lives in the village hidden in the leaves. After chapter 442, it's like her suddenly stopped caring for her. He didn't even mention her to the 4th Hokage. It now, DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE FOR HIM TO GO 6-8 TAILS, PLUS ALMOST 9, BECAUSE OF HER ALMOST DYING!! 2 tails, maybe. But ALMOST 9, was he seriously that ANGRY!? Is he ignoring her, blushing at first to Sakura's confession, letting her hug him, thinking of no one other than Sasuke (as far as I know), not even TALKING ONCE to Hinata, for a good reason? Is there some sort of past that Naruto had with Hinata that NO ONE has ever heard about?

Please, I want to hear what all of you think, cause NaruHina is looking deadly confusing from here on.