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Did this quite a while ago. So tell me what you think. Thanks.

Why? NaruHina takes long for ALL things?

Sat Nov 21, 2009, 12:02 PM
  • Mood: Love
  • Listening to: Anime Music
  • Reading: Harry Potter, A series of unfortunate events, etc
  • Watching: Naruto, Bleach, One piece, Dragonball, etc
  • Playing: Sonic, Kingdom hearts, Dragonball, etc
  • Eating: Pasta, Pizza, Chips, rice, shreddies, carrots, etc
  • Drinking: Coke, milk, orange juice, etc
Could my fanfic BE anymore far from complete? Oh sure, I am really enjoying the wait for true NaruHina :sarcasm:

First of all, I would like to apologize for the opening of the first chapter of Kyuubi's and Reibi's. In my opinion, it wasn't exactly well thought out. I think I submitted it too soon. Some of it even sounds too cheesy for my taste, AND I'M THE FREAKIN WRITER?!! :omg:

Second, I don't know why, but my second chapter is just not finished yet. I believe that I should have finished with it earlier, but maybe I'm just too lazy, or I don't care much for it since I have a life ahead of me, or maybe it's the fact that I'm having alot of trouble with the story since I can't even compare to the original writers skill and knowledge in telling a ridiculously amazingly wrote story, :depressed: Now I feel quite inferior, but I am still getting closer and closer to finishing it. I plan to have it at least over 5000 words. So far...3806. That's...OK, I guess. :hmm: Kishi has been developing the story interestingly so far, that's why it so hard to write, because I'm not sure if I'll be copying what he does. My Fanfic is before the fight with Pain (and I'm not sure to include Pains EXACT past in my story like Kishi did) and after Jiraiya's death (not sure if Sage mode is up for appearance now. :wtf:

I'll at least give you a new name of my own ORIGINAL character: Hikaru (F).

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Now onto a pretting nerve wrecking matter. I am just looking back on what CONNECTION Naruto is always having with Sakura. I am afraid that Kishi was developing Naruto and Sakura's relationship for a reason, a very unpleasant reason for all you NaruHina fans. Kishi has never shown any true interest in Naruto with Hinata. All he did was force Hinata into the battle against Pain, makes her share her love to Naruto for no apparent reason, even though Naruto barely saw three times after he arrived from his 3 year journey AND Naruto apparently and BAKALY/Jerkly forgets the whole confession after that last thought of her. Here's the thing, he doesn't even MENTION her once on how she got brutally beaten, all he mentions to Pain was Jiraiya, Kakashi's death's and the destruction of the whole village and EVERYONE ELSE. It would have just fit if hd mentioned Hinata individually, but no. I bet to HIM, she is just some other girl who lives in the village hidden in the leaves. After chapter 442, it's like her suddenly stopped caring for her. He didn't even mention her to the 4th Hokage. It now, DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE FOR HIM TO GO 6-8 TAILS, PLUS ALMOST 9, BECAUSE OF HER ALMOST DYING!! :wtf: 2 tails, maybe. But ALMOST 9, was he seriously that ANGRY!? Is he ignoring her, blushing at first to Sakura's confession, letting her hug him, thinking of no one other than Sasuke (as far as I know), not even TALKING ONCE to Hinata, for a good reason? Is there some sort of past that Naruto had with Hinata that NO ONE has ever heard about?

Please, I want to hear what all of you think, cause NaruHina is looking deadly confusing from here on. :phew:

Devious Info

  • Interests: Anime, playing games, reading, T.V., walking, etc
  • Favourite movie: Sonic the Movie, Bleach Movie 1, etc
  • Favourite genre of music: Anime Music
  • Favourite artist: don't have one
  • Favourite poet or writer: JK Rowling
  • Favourite style of art: Fan Art
  • Operating System: PS3
  • MP3 player of choice: Zen
  • Favourite game: Kngdom Hearts 2
  • Favourite gaming platform: RPG
  • Favourite cartoon character: Naruto
  • Personal Quote: NaruHina 4EVER!!

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NAME: CATHAL TAYLOR
AGE: 15
DATE OF BIRTH: 19/12/1993
COUNTRY: IRELAND
INTERESTS: ANIME, GAMES, FANFICS, COMPUTERS, WALKING, MARTIAL ARTS

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:iconnaruto9000believeit:
No replies? Huh!

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Warning: The following is just a NaruHina Fanfic. Naruto/NarutoShippuuden, belongs to Kishimoto. Please support the official release - Enjoy: [link]
:iconwhitefoxninja:
Hey I have chapter three of my fanfic up. Go take a look.

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Kishimoto-san, stop toying with our fangirl/bot minds!!
DON"T MAKE ME FLY TO JAPAN WITH CHUCK NORRIS!! :stab:

Naruhina fan! You'll be hooked on this epic story for weeks!-->[link]
:iconnaruto9000believeit:
Um, okay.

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Warning: The following is just a NaruHina Fanfic. Naruto/NarutoShippuuden, belongs to Kishimoto. Please support the official release - Enjoy: [link]
:iconwhitefoxninja:
:3. Can't wait for the next one of yours. :meow:

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Kishimoto-san, stop toying with our fangirl/bot minds!!
DON"T MAKE ME FLY TO JAPAN WITH CHUCK NORRIS!! :stab:

Naruhina fan! You'll be hooked on this epic story for weeks!-->[link]
:iconnaruto9000believeit:
I need to tell you something. There's a good chance I may not be continuing the fanfic. after reading the newest chapter of Naruto manga, I'm starting to think that I'm ruining the sense of the series. I'm not sure how I can continue when I only heard that there was a 10 tailed beast. Sorry, that's just how I feel.

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Warning: The following is just a NaruHina Fanfic. Naruto/NarutoShippuuden, belongs to Kishimoto. Please support the official release - Enjoy: [link]
:iconwhitefoxninja:
............Oh. Wow I am soooo late I had an idea for a ten tailed best....just never knew it existed.^^; I think I wanted it to be a jackal... lolz. Well, I am sorry to heard that. Hang in there though.:hug:

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Kishimoto-san, stop toying with our fangirl/bot minds!!
DON"T MAKE ME FLY TO JAPAN WITH CHUCK NORRIS!! :stab:

Naruhina fan! You'll be hooked on this epic story for weeks!-->[link]
:iconragnarok-xiii:
Thanks for the :+devwatch:

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My NaruHina Fanfiction- [link]
:iconnaruto9000believeit:
YOUR welcome. :D

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Warning: The following is just a NaruHina Fanfic. Naruto/NarutoShippuuden, belongs to Kishimoto. Please support the official release - Enjoy: [link]
:iconwhitefoxninja:
hiya I haven't talked to you in a while. Could you do me a favor and look at my naruhina fanfic? Chapter one and two. Just wanna let you know that ch2 is way better dan 1 so stay with me. ;)

go......right...here----->[link]

This is chapter two, so go to my artists comments to see chapter 1. :3
Please and thank you, and good luck on your own story! :wave:

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Kishimoto-san, stop toying with our fangirl/bot minds!!
DON"T MAKE ME FLY TO JAPAN WITH CHUCK NORRIS!! :stab:

Naruhina fan! You'll be hooked on this epic story for weeks!-->[link]
:iconnaruto9000believeit:
Sure I'll check it out, and thanks for the good luck.

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Warning: The following is just a NaruHina Fanfic. Naruto/NarutoShippuuden, belongs to Kishimoto. Please support the official release - Enjoy: [link]
:iconwhitefoxninja:
:3, your welcome, i can't wait to read it..

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Kishimoto-san, stop toying with our fangirl/bot minds!!
DON"T MAKE ME FLY TO JAPAN WITH CHUCK NORRIS!! :stab:

Naruhina fan! You'll be hooked on this epic story for weeks!-->[link]
:iconnaruto9000believeit:
Yeah, though it's taking longer than i thought. I'm making some modifications, hope it SOUNDS good and makes sense to everyone.

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Warning: The following is just a NaruHina Fanfic. Naruto/NarutoShippuuden, belongs to Kishimoto. Please support the official release - Enjoy: [link]
:iconwhitefoxninja:
tha's what i am hoping....but for now...I shall be studying anime proportions. i want to get better at drawing pplz.
I even know what I want 4 Christmas dis year. A TABLET!!
I dislike using the mouse...alot!

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Kishimoto-san, stop toying with our fangirl/bot minds!!
DON"T MAKE ME FLY TO JAPAN WITH CHUCK NORRIS!! :stab:

Naruhina fan! You'll be hooked on this epic story for weeks!-->[link]

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